lyrics come here boyTrying to write lyrics. Here's my first rip at it. Thoughts?

All for the Rush
At first sight, you look like a nice man
Tall, muscular, with a faint yet attractive tan
I trace your eyes scanning my entire body
Your eyes transmit a message that feels dirty and naughty
My brain tells me to stop before I throw logic out the door
But my heart has already left to dance to that beat you know I adore

I don't want to think about tomorrow
No more dwelling or worrying about my sorrow
When the lights go down, I'm breaking out of this shell
Call me a sinner, say I'm going straight to hell
Nothing matters anymore. I just want to feel a rush

Shirt low, skirt high
Tighten that belt cuz we about to fly
6 inch heels, red lipstick
Final touches for a night that's sick
You ask us why we do it?
IIt's not that we have daddy issues
Or that we've been crying and using too many tissues
宝贝疙瘩, wlyrics come here boye do it for the rush

Just come here boy and dance with me
I wanna feel that rush
Shot after shot after shot after shot
So I can feel that rush
Whisper in my ear that my body's hot
Cuz it makes me feel a rush
We gonna act out all night long so we can feel that rush

I yearn, I beg, I'm crazy for that rush
I don't wanna be civilized and human anymore
Don't wanna be locked up in societies cage no more
People keep telling me to act my age
But I just walk by them and dance wilder on the stage
Like a predator hungry for its prey
I'm craving that big rush

So just let me have tonight
Don't make me start a fight
I want to feel alive, if only for a day
Even if my actions don't seem okay
I'm tired of feeling numb
Trying to figure out life's sum

Tired of making plans for the future instead of for today
Because in lyrics come here boythe end, we're all dead anyway
This is my way of escaping a reality that is endless
You say one day being supressed will make you happy, but what is happiness?
Often we don't understand the conventions we follow
But feeling like you know something can feel less hollow
So if you tell me I'm young and stupid, I'll tell you to hush
Because baby, I do it all for the rush
Wow. your First take???? wow. that is all extremely good, man.

It all connects to this core emotion, this "Rush".

"All For The Rush" is a great core emotion. whether its from a party, the presence of someone or something you admire or maybe getting that adrenaline feeling from something you really want to happen. its all good with me, man. :).